General Comments about Writing a Law Essay
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The purpose of your article is to state and prove your thesis. You need
to persuade your reader that your prescriptive proposal, i.e., the solution to
the selected legal problem, is doctrinally sound. In other words, you need to
convince the reader that your thesis is correct and that it is the best way of
solving the problem you have identified.
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You need to
find authority for every question of law and matter of fact.
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Make sure your ideas are really your own ideas,
even if you think of an idea on your own, preemption check the idea and cite
others with similar ideas in order to avoid plagiarism.
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Use meaningful titles to introduce the
article and each section.
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Transition smoothly between issues to
assure logical flow.
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Address the opposing arguments that others
could make against your thesis.
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Place periods and commas before footnotes
and quotation marks. (e.g.,“Place periods and
commas.”[1])
Structure
of a Law Essay
Title
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The title should:
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persuade people to read the article;
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frame readers’ thinking, i.e., focus the
attention of the reader on a specific angle or aspect of the problem that you
want them to focus on;
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help readers remember your article.
Introduction
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The introduction acquaints the reader with the topic. Its purpose is to
get the readers’ attention and make them want to read the essay. For this
reason, you should try to make your introduction interesting, engaging, and
original.
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A good way to attract attention is to show that there is an important
and interesting problem that needs to be resolved. The most compelling problems
are concrete.
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Organization of the essay: The
introduction must also help organize the essay. It should tell the readers what
you are going to say in your essay.
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The introduction should be short, simple, and
clear.
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The most important aspect of your
introduction is your thesis.
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The thesis should clearly and specifically
convey your point.
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The thesis should deal with a legal problem,
e.g., an unresolved issue, a legal controversy, etc.
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The most interesting theses are
those that combine a descriptive (a claim about what the law is or was) and
prescriptive (a proposal about what should be done) claim.
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Context: You also need
to place your thesis into some larger context.
Background
or overview of the problem
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This section
explains the problem you seek to address, in other words, why you are writing
this paper. If the problem is the status quo, you need to explain why it
is a problem. If the status quo is not a problem, you need to explain why it is
not and why you are writing about it.
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You need to
explain the legal and factual frameworks that are necessary to understand your
article.
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Support your assertions
with facts and with authors who have recognized a similar problem.
(several
sections, each with its own thematic subheading)
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You need to
develop your thesis, i.e., you need to prove your point.
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Find arguments
to support your thesis.
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Use examples
from class, including class activities, class discussions, and required
readings.
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Make reference to theories and problems analyzed in class.
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Think of
possible counterarguments and discuss them.
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Analyze the
law.
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This is your own critical analysis of the
law and how it bears on the problem you identified.
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Make your
analysis in light of the theoretical framework analyzed in class, including the
notions of law, traditions, functions, dysfunctions, sources, types of law, and
classifications.
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Consider policy arguments and social
consequences of your arguments.
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Include the implications and connections
that are necessary to a full understanding of your point.
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Use thematic subheadings to introduce
every argument, idea, or example.
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Divide your arguments in body paragraphs.
Each body paragraph should make just one point that clearly develops and
supports the thesis. In the same way that you have a thesis to indicate the
point of the essay, you should have a topic sentence for each body paragraph. The topic sentence states the point of the paragraph,
and all of the other sentences should support, develop, and explain that point.
Because the topic sentence plays an important role in your paragraph, it must
be crafted with care.
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The purpose of the conclusion is to bring the essay to a satisfying
close. You should avoid bringing up a new point in your conclusion and you
should avoid lengthy and excessive summary. The most successful conclusions are
thoughtful and reflective.
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Back to context. After having presented your topic and proven your
thesis, you want to be able to make an overarching statement based on that
information. Just as the introduction sought to place the paper in the larger
context about the topic, so should the conclusion insist on returning the
reader to that ongoing conversation.
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Summarize your thesis and main arguments.
Sources
on academic legal writing:
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Gerald Lebovits, The Legal Writer. Academic Legal Writing: How to Write
and Publish, 64 NYSBA 2006, 50.
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Eugene Volokh, Academic Legal Writing: Law Review Articles, Student
Notes, Seminars, Papers, and Getting on Law Review 24 (3rd. 2007).
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Florida Gulf Coast University’s Writing Center and Dartmouth
University’ Writing Program.
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Aaron Schwabach, Anatomy of a Law Review Article, Thomas Jefferson Law
Review Association 2005.
Legal databases:
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Quicklaw (Wishart Library website)
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Heinonline (Wishart Library website)
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JSTOR (Wishart Library website)
[1] Gerald Lebovits,
The Legal Writer. Academic Legal Writing: How to Write and Publish, 64 NYSBA
2006, 51.